"This was well written, concise and easy to understand. I loved the idea behind it. It has a very fun idea for a plot, but I unfortunately can't rate it more than 3 stars. I feel like my issues all stem from the fact that it is so short. Short stories can be fun but this one is a little too short, in my opinion. It didn't give any real detail or background to the characters which is something extremely important to me. But if you're looking for something super quick that's not "bogged down" by backstory, this is definitely worth a shot!"